Many people disagree with a school policy which forces children to learn new languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
English is widely spoken all around the world, which is consider as the second language in several countries. This render the new policy of forcing primary students to learn one additional language leading to an objection by a particular section of. From my point of view, I do not advocate their conclusion to some extent.
There is no deny that the mandatory of learning one additional language in primary school will partly put children under pressure and this leads to the anxiety among parents. Since the fact that every student has been struggling with the variety of subjects at school in the current education system, thus, many parents believe this policy can have detrimental effects to the health condition of their child. For instance, many cases of pupils facing with death due to academic pressure at school have been reported on TV recently.
However, turning to the sunny side of this arguing policy, it also brings multifarious beneficial aspects to the fulfil development and bright future for majority of pupils. To begin with, adding one language in academic circumstance helps children approach such an astonishing language of the world. By the way, widening knowledge and broaden the profound insight into a new civilization as every single country around the world has its own different culture identities and so forth. Moreover, forcing to learning a new language, particularly English is the way that school establish a durable foundation for their students to be a global citizen in the future. To some developed nations, English is also considered as their second language. Taking Singapore to be a shining example, one of the richest nations in the world, the attainment of Singapore today was due to the decision of their first Prime Minister, when he made a decision to put English into their education system and regarded as the main academic language as well as the second language in their whole country.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that adding one language for children at school should be compulsory contains both pros and cons, however, the benefits of this policy outperform their drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, by the way, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15186246418 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66927859813 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561604584527 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0435696893 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.307692308 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210496993775 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768810517202 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474504444587 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137974057377 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379547374897 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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