Learning is a process of acquiring new knowledge. Few folks believe that pupil should use internet facilities for learning whereas others think that usage of books are more useful. In my opinion, I believe that online resources have numerous ideas and information relevant for students to learn.
Firstly, online sources will help students to gain more knowledge as it consist of required information. Usage of internet facilities can dealt with many educational strategies which will provide more information from online websites. Each websites can provide disparate knowledge on the same topic. A prime example is social media applications and google websites that gives all information about study aspects beyond their expectations.
On the contrary, printed resources have only limited access to educational perspectives by which there are only few content which are relatable. Moreover, use of printed materials also require the student to use dictionary to find the meaning of a word which does not need in online. For instance, in recent days people tend to use dictionary and other modes to find meaning from internet.
To conclude, online learning provide more accessibility and convenience than printed books, which can allow students to focus on learning with wide variety of materials.
- In the developed world average life expectancy is increasing What problems will this cause for individuals ans society Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations 61
- Some feel that it is a waste of time to plan for the future and it is more important to focus on the present To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
- Many people feel that student should learn from online materials while others feel that it is better to use printed materials Discuss both view and give your own opinion 71
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun content seems to be countable; consider using: 'few contents'.
Suggestion: few contents
...al perspectives by which there are only few content which are relatable. Moreover, use of p...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to provide'
Suggestion: to provide
...ernet. To conclude, online learning provide more accessibility and convenience than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50248756219 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78909750182 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5507509985 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219514587341 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777283512279 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489728152996 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125551986771 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323115527816 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun content seems to be countable; consider using: 'few contents'.
Suggestion: few contents
...al perspectives by which there are only few content which are relatable. Moreover, use of p...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to provide'
Suggestion: to provide
...ernet. To conclude, online learning provide more accessibility and convenience than...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50248756219 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78909750182 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616915422886 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5507509985 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219514587341 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777283512279 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489728152996 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125551986771 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323115527816 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.