Many people keep dogs and cats as companions Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the community as a whole.
Pets are basically a friend or a companion toward their owner, and they are raised with multiple different reasons such as bred for security purposes or for entertainment. While dogs and cats are the most popular pets and occupy more than half of all pets worldwide, many other animals are also kept as pets. However, there are some advantages and disadvantages of caring for animals, especially dogs and cats in daily life. In this essay, I will examine both perspectives from my point of view.
Historically, we all know dogs and cats were worshiped by the ancient Egyptians and occupied an important place in their culture, it is proof that dogs and cats from time immemorial have had an exceptional bond with us humans. Nowadays, they are still the best partners with humans, raising them means that we always have a friend by our side at all times. Plus, the community also received many benefits from the connection between man and pets. This relationship created a number of job fields such as veterinarian, pet caretaker, animal trainer or pet’s shop….Moreover, dogs and cats help our mental and physical health become better. Although they cannot talk, they are still a great listener and make the owner’s mind less tense. Researchers have shown that keeping dogs and cats decreases the ability of causing cardiac disease in elders. Walking with them can always improve one's mood and make a better day. So, raising a pet not only makes a person happier but also makes the community better.
However, there are some disadvantages that may happen in pet ownership. Individuals should not keep a dog or a cat if they are busy people, because raising a pet is an important duty. Plus, pets need good care, nurturing and maintain proper hygiene. All of these things require continuous observation and sometimes people may feel it is difficult and stressful, especially for busy persons. Another downside of raising a pet is healthy risks because of their fur. Some people may get allergic from animal’s fur. Moreover, many of them may have parasites that live on or inside them and infect their owners. Also, raising cats and dogs can pollute the environment because many owners are irresponsible. They let their pets defecate on the street and do nothing, or throw animal corpses into the river. This not only brings negative effects for individuals but also for the whole community.
To sum up, although the disadvantages seem more, it is always nice to have a pet. Owners can change some bad situations by raising pets with good attitude and full responsibility, it will help the community a lot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 10.4138276553 278% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96136363636 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69208262954 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6825802944 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9583333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348431395728 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912715146721 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661103620043 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212123030777 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941560955683 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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