Many people make friends through social sites and chat rooms. Others believe that it is not a good idea to make friends without meeting them face to face. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and relevant examples.
It would be argued by some that interacting through networking sites such as Facebook, Zalo However, in my opinion, I still argue that make friends with face-to-face meetup is the best way to commute.
On the other hand, there are a number of reasons why some belive that online meetings are seen as a good way of communication. The first reason is convenient, users can keep in touch with loved ones and do multiple tasks all at the same time. Normally, arrange an appointment often takes a lot of time to get the agreement coming from the two sides. Another reason is that people are able to make new friends not only in their own country but also from abroad. This acts as a catalyst for having a close insight into a multi-cultural society from foreigners and help introvert people embrace the chance to mix with each other. For instance, a short conversation with a new friend from Thailand can help them know more typical festivals such as Water and Candles festival.
On the other hand, I would argue that face-to-face meetings have an important role to play in making friends. The main benefit of face-to-face meetup is that it strengthen valuable friendship bonds. Because of friend in need is a friend in deed so when they have troubles, a true friends will support them instead of friends through social site can not lend their hand as distance. Besides, mixing with their peers in the real world will have a sense of emotional sharing than fraudster who have a fake account in the virtual world. An appointment will help people feel emotions through the face, gestures or even eyes.
In conclusion, online meetings certainly has its positives, but I believe that the benefits of meeting face-to-face outweigh them in the long time.
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- Nowadays children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things What are the reasons And what measures should be taken to encourage children to spend more time on active or creative things 92
- Many people make friends through social sites and chat rooms Others believe that it is not a good idea to make friends without meeting them face to face Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your own opinion and relevant examples 87
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, so, still, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79139072848 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62458318799 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.037222924 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337391394854 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111131801576 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698217972235 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202691677594 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375566253273 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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