Many people make mistakes y associating money with happiness. What are the reasons and solutions for this?
In this eye-glittering era, money is a driving force. Therefore, a group of people believe that money gives the pleasure in the life and other contradicts it by saying that instead of money there are many other factors are responsible behind the happiness. So this essay shall analyse the reasons and some probable solution for this problem in the upcoming paragraph.
According to the first school of thoughts, there are many views behind the reasons of money is everything. Firstly, these days people gives the value to money for everything as they think without money they are unable to fulfill their needs and desires. Secondly, inflation is very increasing day by day so it is important for the people to earn more and more money to complete their basic needs of their family as most important for their children as well.
In addition to this, today people are trying to enhance the status in the society because they think that when they have a handsome amount of money so everyone gives the respect to them and they get popularity among the society. Further, wealth is very inevitable part of the life as money also gives the insurance to stay healthy for instance, there are some communicable diseases are spreading out and treatment of these diseases is highly expensive so money helps to find the better cure.
According to the second school of thoughts, happiness is the state of mind. The prime one is that, money is not everything because many times a wealthy person is not happy because money gives every luxurious things but money can't give the peace and joy. So people are feeling pleased when they are completing their goals in their life. Furthermore, spending the quality time with their near and dear ones this is the blissful feeling because when the people have a lot of money but they do not have any person to share their moments so they are not glad in their life.
Overall, after a lots of thoughts and deliberation it is true to say that financial status is very crucial part of the every person's life but people should make balance between money and happiness because happiness never compare with money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81029810298 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39463981346 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476964769648 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.5020623367 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.538461538 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3846153846 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287344858581 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110946849864 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538572906193 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17488451529 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725946670922 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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