Many people moving to abroad for higher studies.
What are the main reasons of moving to abroad? To what consequences can it lead?
Many people are migrating to english speaking countries and its impact on the society is very negative and can lead country to some bad consequences. Where as i believe that people moving to abroad because they looking for bright future and immigrating for people can harm our over all economy. I will discus it in details.
Migrating to commonwealth countries is normal now days for people and has a very major affect on societies as well. Students of universities are moving to abroad in very high number to educate their self from best universities in abroad and make their self able to find well paid job through which they can make their future more brighter. For example, friend of mine went to uk to complete his masters degree form london university after completing his studies he will get 3 years post study work visa to find jobs and will be able get settle their. Moving to abroad can be beneficial in many ways.
In addition migration to abroad can also be harmful for our nations in terms of economic areas which every Asian countries are facing now day, because of people leaving their birth countries and moving to abroad in search of better life style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71707317073 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40857085496 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60487804878 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.0513968471 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.875 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260245378576 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131827482315 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1154465833 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196961032411 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270272834479 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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