Many people now choose to move out of crowded cities due to many drawbacks of cities life. Discuss the disadvantages of living in a big cities
It is considered that living in big cities has many opportunities for better living. However, many inhabitants, who do not feel comfortable settling down, decide to leave. The decision is based on awareness of disadvantages in city life and could be expressed obviously in two following passages.
The first disadvantage is pollution which is a serious problem in almost populous cities can negatively impact human health. The percentage of citizens having lung disease increases appreciably because they always breathe polluted air outside, in recent times, including inside. Moreover, urban population can be faced not only the damaging lung function but also a number of several diseases which is cancer, water intoxication
The main problem for anyone who migrates to a large city is that the cost of living is likely much higher than it is in countryside. Inhabitants of city have to pay high price for housing, transport, food but almost of them can not afford for a stable life.
To sum up, living in a crowded urban has many drawbacks such as no accommodation, polluted environment. That why many people have to move out of populous cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ies can negatively impact human health. The percentage of citizens having lung dise...
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Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nside. Moreover, urban population can be faced not only the damaging lung functio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14893617021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91025022298 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670212765957 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7847717864 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.555555556 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333398805388 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136451986012 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863098710237 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193317825719 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979282370194 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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