Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
These days, the use of mobile phones in people’s spare time has witnessed a great increase. Consequently, some people regard this pastime as a waste of time, a valuable resources while some people find it worth their time. In this essay, I will present reasons behind this phenomenon before coming to a conclusion whether it is a beneficial or harmful trend.
To begin with, it is clear that nowadays mobile phones have become a universal device used for various purposes. As a all-in-one compact gadget, a mobile phone offers its user a chance to keep themselves entertained, search for information, maintain and expand their social circles. For example, with the widespread availability of the Internet, people can instantly get access to video-sharing platforms like YouTube or Tiktok to unwind after a long day at work or school. Furthermore, these websites also offer a sea of information coming in handy with their jobs or school subjects. To illustrate, many have learned a great deal from tutorial and knowledge-sharing videos uploaded by experts or accredited organisations. Therefore, it is no exaggeration to say that mobiles, powered by the Internet, have become an indispensable part of our lives and are used constantly in people’s leisure time.
However, it is obvious that some people are spending their time on unnecessary activities on their mobile phones. In other words, their time is passed without beneficial gains. They may waste their time in chit-chat, unproductive talks on the Internet or completely absorbed in video games. As a result, they lose the track of time and their leisure activities encroach on their productive time during which they are supposed to do their jobs or study. Worse, some end up having bad grades or losing their productivity or even face with bitter outcomes. For example, my cousin was expelled out of university due to his negligence of study as he was totally engrossed by the temptations of online games. Furthermore, his being discharged from school is not the rare occurrence. In fact, there is a staggeringly huge number of students being forced to leave or suspended from their study because of their excessive use of mobile phones.
To conclude, with the above-mentioned arguments, I find this trend is, by and large, a positive development. However, mobile phone users need to draw a line between their leisure time and productive time. Otherwise, they will be confronted with some undesired consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, may, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in fact, as a result, by and large, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17955112219 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99922565115 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57855361596 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5533402088 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.85 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.05 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22291696002 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653994266487 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448433010461 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137669631852 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430828050228 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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