Many people prefer to spend money and not save money what are the reason ? It is positive or negative development

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In the ultra fast era , it is a universal truth that , everyone...
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... fast era , it is a universal truth that , everyone spend a lot of money on electr...
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... electronic equipments and other sources . So it is bad impact on their living sty...
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...o it is bad impact on their living style . It is negative impact on human beings ....
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... . It is negative impact on human beings . I delieve my point of view in my upcomi...
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...e my point of view in my upcoming crumbs To begin with , there are several disadv...
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...ntages of spending money on mobile phone , luxuries cars . Firstly , in present er...
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...ng money on mobile phone , luxuries cars . Firstly , in present era , everyone an ...
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...n mobile phone , luxuries cars . Firstly , in present era , everyone an spending a...
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...luxuries cars . Firstly , in present era , everyone an spending a large amount of ...
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...s . Firstly , in present era , everyone an spending a large amount of money to liv...
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...nding a large amount of money to live a luxuries life for example , people are buying an...
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...oney to live a luxuries life for example , people are buying an expences car and i...
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...ing an expences car and it is too costly . So it is bad influence on them . Becaus...
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... costly . So it is bad influence on them . Because in future they would not be eas...
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...stly . So it is bad influence on them . Because in future they would not be easily to s...
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...easily to survive owing to lack of money . Secondaly adult childrens are also spen...
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...ey on fast food and expences motor bikes Moreover , if people have habit of savin...
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...od and expences motor bikes Moreover , if people have habit of saving money fo...
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...it of saving money for their future life , so it is good for them but in future th...
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...nough money to fullfill their aspiration . So masdive should save money for future...
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...sdive should save money for future plans . For instance , in past, there if a per...
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...ve money for future plans . For instance , in past, there if a person could not s...
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...money for future plans . For instance , in past, there if a person could not save mone...
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...r future plans . For instance , in past, there if a person could not save money ....
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... there if a person could not save money . However after following year he or she...
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...here if a person could not save money . However after following year he or she have so...
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...ave money . However after following year he or she have some financial problem th...
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...e some financial problem then he or she face myriad of problem regarding the lack of...
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...d of problem regarding the lack of money . While parents are spending more money f...
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... more money for their children education and luxuries life style To conclude ...
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...ldren education and luxuries life style To conclude , i reckon , although savin...
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... and luxuries life style To conclude , i reckon , although saving is better f...
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...and luxuries life style To conclude , i reckon , although saving is better fo...
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...s life style To conclude , i reckon , although saving is better for everyones...
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... although saving is better for everyones . I these days people spend on wages at l...
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...d to save money for their future carrier
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63967611336 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38344393681 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550607287449 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0658292053 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1538461538 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300042818581 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116509460733 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683235544448 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189103768436 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491545146301 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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