While the understanding of a local movie can be more convenient, many people tend to watch foreign films. There are several reasons for this trend, which will investigate, and I believe that the government should contribute to promoting domestic movies by devoting budget for this industry.
As the audience's awareness rises, the level of the audience's expectations increases as well as. If domestic movie's producer cannot meet the expectations of the audience, they will turn to watch foreign movies. The lack of applying attractive special effects since the shortage budget or the existence of the belief barrier often acts as an obstacle in the producer path. For instance, movies like Avatar or avengers have world spread reputation because of their fascinated special effects or many Muslims countries such as my countries are impotent to display real aspect of life through the restrictions of their religion. Hence, foreign films have become more popular among many people.
In my view, the government should support local film industries by assigning a budget to produce movies which are expected to have a bright future. While, in every country, many talented film-makers just need an opportunity to prove themselves, and they had always encountered financial problems to create a masterpiece, government support can pave the way. Forasmuch as the government would benefit from the results of this investment by an increase in employment in the film industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even attracting tourist and producing accessories related to movies, so it is a reasonable dealing. New Zealand, for examples, has hosted millions of tourists annually since producing the 'Lord of the Rings' which were partly funded by government subsidies. Therefore, financial support to local film industries from the government helps to progress the level of producing movies.
In conclusion, what cause to attract people to watching foreign movies instead of local movies are quality and restrictions which can alleviate by government assistance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'audiences'' or 'audience's'?
Suggestion: audiences'; audience's
...oting budget for this industry. As the audiences awareness rises, the level of the audie...
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Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'movies'' or 'movie's'?
Suggestion: movies'; movie's
...tions increases as well as. If domestic movies producer cannot meet the expectations o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4375 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8425065963 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571875 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1917774534 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.846153846 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369449957559 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135994486337 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104641241965 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203603721158 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939604546983 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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