Children are influenced by lots of factors. Some people think that a family is a place and this place has the greatest rate influence on children, but others believe that having many other reasons such as music or friends which have a great influence on children. In my opinion, both of family and music or friends are all influence on children.
On the one hand, some people think that family has the greatest impact on the growing up of children because parents have a part of the responsibility to teach children and they have plenty of time to expose to their children. Therefore, parents tend to teach their children via a way that they want. For example, parents will teach children about politeness. This helps children formation the politeness personality. In contrast, if parents have the wrong way, they will teach the wrong way for their children. Moreover, children tend to imitate their parents when they meet some typical activities of their parent and this also influence on children.
On the other hand, others claim that having many other factors influence children alike music or friends. To begin, children now spend space-time to listen to music or play a game because of music helps them feel relax and having a good mood. For example, if children cannot concentrate on their study, music helps them due to some kinds of music that help people concentrate on studying. In contrast, if children listen to a piece of sad music, their's mood can feel not good. Furthermore, other relationship such as friends which also impact on children. Some children have a close friend, they will influence each other's personality.
To sum up, although some people think that family has the greatest impact on children, I believe that different factors such as music or friends also influence the greatest on children.
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- Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Task 2: The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts? 56
- Small businesses should avoid recruiting young women who do not have their own family in order to avoid paying maternity leave later on. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- the diagram shows the process of making soft cheese. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 617, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... close friend, they will influence each others personality. To sum up, although som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99022801303 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5405913274 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416938110749 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1568431271 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318413158582 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136531416095 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969871750112 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252658640567 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917548951941 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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