Many people say that we now live in ‘consumer societies’ where money and possessions are given too much importance. Others believe that consumer culture has played a vital role in improving our lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion - {ATSPiDY}
Consumerism grants people a taste of the good life. Obviously, it is also engaged with material possession, earning money, and social status in society. However, some people believe that consumer culture might bring a vital role in order to improve lives. Although this is true, in my opinion, good life could not potentially affect by consumer culture.
Firstly, Consumerism has several positives which are engaged with a happy life. Moreover, happy life which is marked as acquire prestigious items or money may force people to work hard to increase their earnings. Thereby, creativity and innovation are flooding in their head as a motivational drive to earn more money. For example, the owner of an online shop who really wants to buy an iPhone uses several innovations in order to raise her sale. Secondly, the power of consumerism also affects trading among countries and then consecutively increases national domestic income. For example, demand for Japanese vehicles might rise export and also encourages the economic condition. Furthermore, those explanations above mentioned that consumerism is a stance for life improvement.
On the contrary, good living is not always linear with consumerism. Some people are willing to be selfish and unaware with surroundings. They may guide their behavior to satisfy pleasure with unlimited. This act makes them victims of their act; certain it is followed by unhappy feelings. For instance, chronic shopaholics never feel satisfied with their buying although they already shop for doubled even tripled in a month. Moreover, being highly concerned about what is needed might cause people less care of the environmental condition. They do not aware and think to spend their money for charity or donations for humanity probably.
Finally, the impact, good and bad, of consumer society might probably coin as a human choice for their live improving. I believe that every person already takes highly consideration before diving into consumer culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40255591054 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73100715967 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635782747604 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3482333379 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.55 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.65 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135267525388 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430411698866 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627723244585 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105642243317 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723175244073 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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