Every person will have influence to their respective region or native place and the people on a place will be inspired on the victory of someone from their own place. However, a few people argue that the success of person is not depended on the place. This essay will discuss how the native region influence on a person's achievement based on the opportunities it provides and the native region's benefit on their own successful personalities.
The environment where people live will shape the attitude, thinking ability and behavior. People who find both challenges and opportunities from their own community and those who overcome the challenges and turn them to a new path would achieve a new horizon of victory. Irrespective of the field, it will work for some people and we call them as accomplished person. For instance, Lee Kew-Ann, the father of Singapore, is known as he was from Singapore and made it as a country from nothing to a leading global nation.
The contribution from a successful person back to the community is also great. One person's success story will inspire the entire region and the chances of more success from that place are extremely high. For example, Rakesh Junjunvala an ace investor and third rich man from India learned the basics of stock from the community he belong to as most of them do small scale trading. His passion was investing and he started with borrowed money and made big profits. This story inspired others in the region and his village is now known for many successful traders and investors.
To conclude, it is clear that the native region give a lot of opportunities for people for their success and they also light a path for the community they belong to.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ss how the native region influence on a persons achievement based on the opportunities ...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'belongs'.
Suggestion: belongs
...e basics of stock from the community he belong to as most of them do small scale tradi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, third, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62714755945 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5535660081 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.846153846 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313805663799 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118960099179 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816835731237 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189938848468 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753360498714 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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