Many people think schoolchildren should study fewer subjects with great details but some people believe that it is better to study variety of subjects and develop their knowledge. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some people think subjects in school should be shortened then school children could focus on important fields. But others say that great number of school subjects help to children to be a enlightened, and I believe that some subjects should be reduced.
On the one hand, some people feel government should review education system. Firstly, they say children study very hard and overload that can be heartache to young generation, and sometimes it would be waste of time. As a result, they get tired of education as they grew up. This time might be spent another activities like sport excises and other special fields. Secondly, it requires a huge amount of money on education system that it might be waste of money in the end because some children do not study their dislike subjects. Parents of children pay to school for all subjects, but children study only few that they love.
On the other hand, one major benefit of studying all subject young children can develop their knowledge. Well-educated people in school are easy-going and they do not easy give up. In addition today’s economic and politic situation requires to workers that knowing new technologies. Furthermore, supporters of all sciences emphasize the importance of studying general for young generation might help to choose future fields because of did not study very well at school. Finally, if some school subjects would be reduced children might spend their time for unnecessary things. In other words they do not know what is true or what is wrong and knowledge is good for this issue.
In conclusion it may be wrong but as I have said we should reduce some subjects from school curriculum not all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... school subjects help to children to be a enlightened, and I believe that some su...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...-going and they do not easy give up. In addition today’s economic and politic situation ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96453900709 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55040233785 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535460992908 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5095342983 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213962375211 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803732027571 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612932470222 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146932918156 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506760350067 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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