Many people think technological devices such as smart phones, tablets and mobile phones bring more disadvantages than advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a wide number of individuals all around the world believes that technological furnishings such as cellphones, tablets or computer will seriously affect their in negative way. In my opinion, I completely believe that the technological devices are so beneficial for our modern life and the benefits of it are larger than the drawbacks for several reasons.
On the one hand, it is undoutedly think that the advantages of technical products affect the humans' lifestyle in numerous negative ways but the people still have the solutions to solve with those problems. Initially, those devices may make people lose their attention to do something in real life if they spend too much time using it or always think about the topics that they have seen on those furnishings. For instnace, the students nowadays tend to spend most of their time surfing on the Internet without the demands until they feel exhausted or find out an attractive problems . This can kill their time which they may use to widen their horizon, do homeworks or share the houseworks with their parents and this to several negative results such as having a terrible school performances or having various eyes problems. But this still has a solution to solve it., that is they need to manage their time to balance between using technological devices and learning or working.
On the other hand, the technological furnishings bring lots of advantages for residents. First and foremost, this is one of the common products which can help people connect with numerous platforms to gain more knowledge. In the modern life, there are so many applications and websites which can help learner study anytime and anywhere with the device whixh is connected with the Internet. Moreover, the technical devices also one of the convinient tools to manage their time or note down important things without taking more times. When people see an interested things or something that significant for them, they just need to take a notice in the note application on their phone or take a picture of that.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the technological devices are really beneficial for our life. In the future, I think that people should enhance more applications or websites to help this become more convinient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...ber of individuals all around the world believes that technological furnishings such as ...
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Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...t their in negative way. In my opinion, I completely believe that the technologic...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ntages of technical products affect the humans lifestyle in numerous negative ways but...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...usted or find out an attractive problems . This can kill their time which they may...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...ke a picture of that. In conclusion, I firmly believe that the technological d...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...beneficial for our life. In the future, I think that people should enhance more a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0585106383 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72376985935 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9258288784 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.857142857 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176100371006 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653665668662 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299602001742 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114853829775 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239410471017 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.