Many people today are worried about ‘cybercrime’ such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does ‘cybercrime’ cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and businesses to take?
Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own experience.
cyber crime has been escalating rapidly and many people are suffered with problems of loss of personnel data and corruption of business details and agendas. However, in this essay explain about some detrimental effects of this crime and reckon the possible solutions to tackles this issues. Mainly, the most major problem associated with the online crime that, privacy issues and misusing the professional descriptions which may solute by stringent software updates and legislation.
Personnel and social identity theft would be the result of unauthorized entry of virus and malware product by the hackers, which may lead to deleterious effect on individual, family, and society. In brief, people could have facing the problem with the personnel information's namely, address, phone numbers, bank details, accounts, and files by the hackers and the challengers. This would make problems between the relationships, work place, companies and even presumably countries. For instance, a big issue with USA election by the cyber crime associated with hacking and attacking huge developments and secrets of American parliament. Moreover, by this impact, people have issues with physically and psychologically such as, misusing photos, and identities, bank savings and so on. For example, many young men and female students would have facing issues with this crime in order to misusing photos from social medias, anonymous provocative calls and transferring moneys from accounts.
However, government should legislate over such crimes in terms of sentence, punishments, whereas, software and online marketers would enforce good software and preventive measures irrespective of face and gender. Firstly, an appropriate rules and regulations, agreement license, must be followed by government officials. Identify the malware groups, hackers, and constitution over such threats and confining the problems in future. Secondly, online companies and software programmers would develop prominent software to identify the hackers to large extent. Meanwhile, instruct the customers to technical prevention's like changing password intermittent, make strong codes with intricacy. Furthermore, inform to the dealers about privacy issues or noticed threats to the authority as early as possible like a government of India tackled a hacker by the innovative software recently by this method.
To sum up, online hacking and theft would be a rising phenomenon, this may lead to crisis in personnel, social and national controversy. Although, there were many choices to be prevent and mitigate cyber crime by the united help of government and online dealers and software.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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cyber crime has been escalating rapidly and m...
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...imental effects of this crime and reckon the possible solutions to tackles this i...
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...one numbers, bank details, accounts, and files by the hackers and the challengers...
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...s to the authority as early as possible like a government of India tackled a hacker...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in brief, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 10.4138276553 307% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2262.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74111675127 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89539071315 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56345177665 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7438019405 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.058823529 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1764705882 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0866862137133 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030047958366 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222329344149 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054792293551 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258523108017 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 78.4519038076 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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