Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the causes people do this. Do you think this is a good thing or bad thing?
There is no doubt that, people are putting so much efforts to have eternal youth. The advancement in medical technology has got sucess upto certain percentages. However this has more devastating effect on their body and life. This essay will delve in to coz and effect of such phenomenon and followed by my opinion.
Firstly, It is a dream for many people to live the younger life for longer span of their life because they feel that being young they can achieve more attention, chances of opportunities in career and successful life. However, one can not change the thier biological development but using the cosmetic and medical treatment they can look younger than they are. So, as result, people are opting such medical treatments. For an instance, today, many women are opting for the breast implants to look younger. This young look comes at some cost. Survey was carried out and found that people are opting for breast implants may suffer from breast cancer and the famous actress Angelina Joli is an example of it.
Moreover, Today, no one would like to have wrinkled skin and the people of both the genders are using botox drug to tighten their skin to look younger. Although, extreme care and medical expertise it has been found that botox used get infected with skin cancer and eventually put their life in danger. Furthermore, such treatment are having high cost and people are spending huge amount from their saving or by borrowing it from other to get treated, which will put their future danger. In addition to that government of few countries has banned such activity in order to save the life of their citizen.
To sum up, to look younger at the cost of life is not promising phenomenon. Despite of the advantages, I strongly believe that the disadvantages have more detrimental effects on individual's health and life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, in addition, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87579617834 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4616268768 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557324840764 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3871424943 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18243065508 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627982822404 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358647523475 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103107850686 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397496761769 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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