Through of history, humans beings have wanted look without wrinkles and do not get old, trying to do many things for look younger that their age. There are several reasons for this. In this essay I am going to do my personal opinion about this fact.
One reason is than people want to look always young beceause it gives hem more selfsteem, more security about themselves and also, they can feel more healthy. Also, feeling youngers could give people more opportunities in their life. For example, they can get a better job, and get mores friends.
An other reason, is because youngth is sinonim of beauty so people can feel more attractive to the other sex, Besides, people want to imitate to their favourite artists.
I believe, that putting a lot effort in looking young is no really a good thing becuase it put more pressure and estress in people. Who do everything for look younger than what they are really. Also, sometimes people put in risk their health when they do some surgeries which some dangerous.
To sump up, people always want to look young regardless the consecuences. so I think that it is really harmful to them
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: HUMANS_BEINGS[2]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean: 'human beings'?
Suggestion: human beings
Through of history, humans beings have wanted look without wrinkles and d...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...this. In this essay I am going to do my personal opinion about this fact. One reason is than ...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'look'.
Suggestion: always look
...t. One reason is than people want to look always young beceause it gives hem more selfst...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: Another
...a better job, and get mores friends. An other reason, is because youngth is sinonim o...
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Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...look young regardless the consecuences. so I think that it is really harmful to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, really, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74874371859 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32758264486 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608040201005 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1134900002 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.75 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369406828402 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127540672875 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824496844931 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187450171726 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11274935173 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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