Many people use distance-learning program to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the teaching method which is much more suitable for students. However, whether students should study online or at college or university has caused heated debate. I agree with the view that it is necessary for students to go to school to study for the following reasons.
First, it is true that attending school will enable students to develop their communication skills. This is because if they just stay at home and study by looking at the screen without talking and expressing any ideas to anyone, they will not be likely to communicate well when meeting anyone outside. Take, for example, when Covid 19 appeared, no one could go out to work or go to school, students had to study online. But. after a while, they could not adapt to the new teaching method, they are even less talkative and just want to stay alone, which sometimes leads to serious diseases such as autism. Undoubtedly, when they do not have to discuss with their friends about the subjects or are too lazy to talk about anything in life that they went through or they do not have anything in common to talk about, this will make them become more introverted. Therefore, it is necessary for them to enter school to study instead of at home if not they will not be confident to communicate with anyone.
To add further credence to my assertion, I note the negative impact on the students ' ability to study. In my view, it is very difficult for students to obtain fully all the knowledge and skills online, resulting in their laziness and discouraging them from studying. But, if they do not understand any disciplines, they can get support from their teachers as well as encouragement to study from their friends, and they even can study and help each other to make progress together. This will raise their sense of initiative and get good results in studying.
In conclusion. a school is a society in miniature, so students should attend school to promote their communication as well as the encouragement in studying. Moreover, at school, they have teachers and friends who are likely to assist them in the job competitive market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79892761394 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62663720815 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517426273458 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2449650524 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8666666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102167330022 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371644897561 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364024303017 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697333355947 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467965252889 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.