Nowadays, social networks are becoming more and more popular. The majority of individuals use it to connect with their friends and family and update information around them. Although the Internet community has its drawbacks, I believe it provides more benefits than drawbacks.
On the one hand, no one can deny that social media helps to connect individuals from all over the world. A simple and convenient way to contact is that users just need a smartphone connected to the Internet and an account on Facebook, Zalo that they make friends and contact to the person they want. Therefore, they can save money and time instead of having to go to a specific place to meet. For example, I am living away from home, so I often use Zalo to call with my family. The sound quality is good and we also meet face each other through the screen. Moreover, social networks are an ideal place to access information. Currently, people choose to watch the news on social networking sites instead of newspapers because it always provides the latest and fastest information. Hot news is shared by people at breakneck speed through this social networking site.
On the other hand, the Internet causes some inconvenience for users. It makes people disconnected in the real world. They felt that calling each other was enough, so they did not meet or talk directly. Besides, they live in a virtual world in which they post incorrect statuses and images of themselves for the purpose of bragging or wanting to be admired. Furthermore, they can reach out and share false news. News posted on websites can be wrong because someone wants to get views or destroy something. If readers do not have enough awareness of that information and they even share it then they are in big trouble.
In conclusion, I agree that social networking has many benefits as it is used to stay in touch with family and friends, and access news everywhere around them. However, people also need to use it correctly to avoid troubles in their life.
- Many people use social media to keep in touch with other people and for news events Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 87
- Online education is becoming more and more popular Some people claim that e learning has so many benefits that it will replace face to face education soon Others say that traditional education is irreplaced Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81739130435 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55512466345 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0216714519 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232627096126 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667816280284 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545382714424 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144508668059 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710265767385 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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