Like it or not, you are being judged by how you look and how you dress! People like to wear fashionable clothes. They know that it can help them to find a better job, get more respect or have more friends. The stylish clothes help us to feel more attractive and confident. However, doesn’t it cost too much money? Nowadays, a lot of people care more about their appearance than about character, values and personality. As a result, fashionable clothes can be considered as a bad trend.
To begin with, the stylish clothes cost a lot, especially if they come from well-known designers...
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Those how look nice and wear stylish clothes earn more money
Those who look nice and wear stylish clothes earn more money
Sentence: They are wasting money on fashionable clothes instead of invest them.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to of and invest
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No. of Words: 248 350
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 248 350
No. of Characters: 1083 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.968 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.367 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.426 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.302 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.487 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5