It is common for students to experience traveling or working for some time before initiating their tertiary education. I strongly support this view because of the benefits of this practice, which we will discuss in the essay.
First of all, taking a break from studies and experiencing the world gives students new perspective of life. It will give students some time to observe the world and analyse how their skills would help in making the world a better place. Because of this they can choose more appropriate high demanding and high paying careers. For instance, the computer science was in high demand few years back but, popularity of this subject is diminishing gradually and it is not trending anymore. If students takes a break and observe the job market, then these subtle changes in industry will appear using which they can choose appropriate career path.
Secondly, many organizations look for candidates with prior work experience because it will ensure the work ethic and team work of the candidate. In these competitive world it will definitely gives an edge to the applicant over the normal candidate. In addition to that, students get to understand work place communication and real work scenarios better. Take an example of Elon Musk, who worked as librarian in his gap year and learned the importance of Automation has changed the world with self driven cars.
To recapitualte, more and more people taking a gap year before starting their journey to the tertiary education. I strongly believe this is crucial not only for selecting their specialization in graduation but also bagging the high paying opportunities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: to appropriate
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05597014925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68978611056 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570895522388 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 268.0 20.2975951904 1320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1355.0 106.682146367 1270% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 268.0 20.7667163134 1291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 95.0 7.06120827912 1345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2518294341 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.2518294341 0.084324248473 299% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151194556402 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252574359414 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 136.4 13.0946893788 1042% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -200.54 50.2224549098 -399% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 107.8 11.3001002004 954% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.55 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.82 8.58950901804 242% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 109.2 10.1190380762 1079% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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