Going abroad for higher studies has become very common nowadays among the youth. It can be for many reasons. They think that they would be able
to live a healthy and better lifestyle their. However, it had some negative impacts also. In this essay, I shall discuss the benefits and the problems
associated with it in the forthcoming paragraph with a logical conclusion.
The purpose behind these can be many such as early exposure, varieties of job opportunities, best conduct. There are many good points for this. Firstly, the student would get to know about the
different culture and traditions of that country. They would get the chance to socialise with the scholars from all over the globe. For instance, when an
Indian student transfer to South Korea, then he would get to know about the food culture their like eating ramyeon by making sound, then about their
wearing different style of clothing, about the education their and many more. Secondly,they would get to work in renowned companies over the
worldwide and the degrees of most of their universities are acceptable in every corner of the earth. For an example, if european pupil had done his
master's degree from The University Of Toronto in Canada, then he will get job opportunities in Canada as well as in America, Uk or any other country
he wants to transfer.
On the other hand, there are also some drawbacks for this. One problem is the cost of studying their. The value of currency of one country can not be
same for the other country. For an illustration, the fees of studying bachelor in computer science in India can be upto 5-10 lakhs. But the same course
in most universities of canada can reach upto the range of 30-35 lakhs. Another problem is the home sickness that most of the newbies face their.
Because everything is new and different for them. At first, they find it very hard to cooperate with the tradition over their.
To summarise with everything that discussed above; learning in another nation has many advantages, but on the other side, it has many disadvantages
as well. However, better universities and high education withstands some negative sides of it.
- In many countries the quality of life in the large cities is becoming worse What causes this problem What measure can be taken to solve it 84
- In some cities people are choosing cars instead of bicycles while in other cities riding bikes are replacing cars Why is this the case Which development do you think is better 73
- Nowadays some countries are spending a lot of money to make it easier to use bicycle why is this so Is it the best solution to transport problem 71
- Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university to travel or gain work experience Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time 59
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92391304348 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.564848905 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535326086957 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1304744795 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3636363636 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844012400279 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292193613329 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392906843674 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0290975053388 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300690825514 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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