Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think is a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Education has became most significant part of each child. Some folks uphold that many pupils have to study those subjects in which they do not have any kind of intrest and this is time wasting phenomenon. Well, i belive that it will be win-win situation for study every subject.
There are some reasone behind this that why it is considrable fact as waste of time. To initate with, generally student should do whatever they want to do. An atmosphere should be given by schools and parents that way which is in fevaour of pupils. What is more, if some subjects provided to students in which they do not have any intrest then their will be consider as misbehave with their goals,life,imagination so on. In last, if some subject offered to child in which he/she has well-intrest then he/she can do extaordinory work and shows their potential towards it.
On the countary side, this statement has some causes that why all subjects are essential for study. Firstly, if some chepters do not offered to pupils then thier knowledge became limited. It would not expand over the period of time. Secondly, some of them do not like some subject but we should provide them. To instance, a child do not like history portion yet he has to complete that subject because it is important to know about your tradination historical monuments. Lastly, as per some acedemic schedule every subject has equal importance for pass in the exam so they have to put thier legitimate efforts in that.
To put it in a nutshell, i pendown to saying that every subject that has given to students has some importance behind that. It is also nessesary to get basic knowledge about all thing as we are part of global cosmos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
Education has became most significant part of each child. So...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , life
...e consider as misbehave with their goals,life,imagination so on. In last, if some sub...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e limited. It would not expand over the period of time. Secondly, some of them do not like som...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'lastly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'kind of', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.205521472393 0.247107183377 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.184049079755 0.155533422707 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0674846625767 0.0946595960268 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0521472392638 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0613496932515 0.0437548338989 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128834355828 0.122226691241 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0245398773006 0.0403226058552 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6192086276 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0429447852761 0.0326793684256 131% => OK
Particles: 0.00306748466258 0.00163938923432 187% => OK
Determiners: 0.0950920245399 0.0861772015684 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.021472392638 0.021408717616 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0368098159509 0.011925033212 309% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1694.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72297297297 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304054054054 0.374742101984 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236486486486 0.28420135186 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14527027027 0.203846283523 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0912162162162 0.137316102897 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6192086276 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 55.4313378254 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3273319578 49.517814964 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.814263465372 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 42.1486486486 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.20618556701 1.69124875643 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372558204449 0.332605444948 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0912497316941 0.102741220458 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0865043630768 0.0668466124924 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474090212529 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130455902654 0.148594505496 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140759789095 0.134430193775 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918634362635 0.0742795772207 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.38196537511 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0244283192013 0.0638462369009 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252071136464 0.228012699653 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823254174134 0.058150111329 142% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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