In this current developing technology era, many adolescents have their own mobile phone. Although this phenomenon has its merits and demerits which will be discussed below in this essay, I would say that it brings more negative impacts to them.
Regarding the advantages, having personal smart phone will make the youth generation easier to do their school tasks. For instance, since the school curricula has now developed a lot, the students usually asked to make any videos or recordings related to their subjects. Moreover, several subjects also require students in doing more literature research that will be easier to be done via their smart phone as the internet could be accessed quickly. Additionally, out of school requirements, mobile phone will be beneficial to teenagers in built their social live since they will be easier to talk and to share with new friends.
In spite of the benefits above, owing mobile phone also has several drawbacks. In my point of view, improper information or resources from the internet is one of negative effects which have to be considered. As we know, the adolescents usually have high curiousity that trigger them to search any information that might be not in their age range such as adults thing. This can be dangerous for their developments. Once study revealed that porn evidently make an addiction to the youth that directly impacts their personality. Furthermore, if they become addicted on their phone, they will be less interest in physical activities that also affecting their health. A survey results said that 60% of adolescents got lazy to go parks or not having excitement anymore for sports because they said they have to play online game.
In conclusion, having personal mobile phone has its positive and negative aspects. However, its demerits should be accounted as urgent thing that parents have to pay attention.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing that parents have to pay attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16993464052 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67234753091 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9725829555 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.466666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228646122327 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843282087352 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690773832626 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147086363736 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648490148739 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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