many things that used to be done in home by hands are now being done by machines.does this development bring advantages or disadvantages?
In this concurrent world,it is undoubtedly fact that more and more things which were done by hands are being done by machines at present.I propound that having a machine has become helpful to us in various ways.I will discuss both the views in the following paragraph.
Adequate evidences are obtainable to substaintiate the concept of machines.The top-notch concrete reason is to save the time.In these days,there are lot of confort due to having some machines.For instant,one can easily save their vital time and do all the work efficiently.Another rationale which hauls me to patron is accuracy as the machines are more accurate compare to human like it cuts fruits and vegetables in perfect shape.To uphold my notion,i would quote an instant of saving time which is already written by me.
Life is like a coin.Pleasure and pain are the two sides.Only one can visible at a time but remember another is waiting for its turn.so,there are some disadvantages also of using the machines.for example,people become more dependant on the machines.Once my vaccur cleaner had stopped due to some fault.However,instead of cleaning my house,I prefered to wait for the cleaner to be repaired.
To conclude ,though there are many disavdvantages of machines like sadentery life style,i firmly believe that thing made of machines are more accurate and fast.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26728110599 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25606610636 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640552995392 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.991666409 49.4020404114 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 285.75 106.682146367 268% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.25 20.7667163134 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162812816756 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943745778364 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627458327291 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943745778364 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627458327291 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.5 13.0946893788 233% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.61 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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