Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
It is true that some university students stay with their parents and siblings while the others stay away from home to live in halls of residents or rooms for rent to pursue their study. There are advantages and disadvantages of both these situations.
There are some benefits and drawbacks in staying with families while entering academic environment. First of all, one major advantage worth considering is that they are able to economize on accommodation. Another benefit is more opportunities provided for students to strengthen the family bonds, a factor which is crucial in the process of entering adult life. Nevertheless, some advantages may arise from this decision. A significant exposure to various distractions would be a barrier to study process. It would be hard to keep up with students’ schedule, which is closely related to graduation with flying colors.
On the other hand, those who make a decision to stay far from home also face a wide range of obstacles. One of the main disadvantages is high cost of accommodation. These students choosing living in major urban centers in preference to hometown pay for a large amount of hiring money including deposit only to utilize basic facilities. Another serious drawback is easily getting exposed to social temptations, for instance, drug or alcohol addiction and prostitution. By contrast, a variety of benefits would be gained from independence life in another city. Students are able to establish research routines through reading academic books, discuss with fellow friends and prepare animated presentations. Thanks to these activities, friendships and relationships would also be formed and developed, benefits which could be of great benefits to career development in the future.
In conclusion, while there are various differences of personal circumstances of individual university students, a wealth of potential advantages and disadvantages of living at home or away from home needs to be thoroughly considered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
... accommodation. These students choosing living in major urban centers in preference to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46278317152 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13734308427 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588996763754 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.585580101 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297537805335 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842349722796 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10232741793 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228625492124 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141955938396 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.