It is true that a number of youngsters nowadays keep switching their jobs. This trend stems from a variety of reasons and in my opinion, while there are some drawbacks of this tendency, I would argue that these are outweighed by the benefits.
There are some reasons why the young changes their jobs and careers. Firstly, young people often have a desire to experience new, more challenging working environment. For example, many youngsters dislike the idea of having a steady or desk job and therefore, switch their career to seek more dynamic opportunities that can later prove more fulfilling. Secondly, job hoppers can acquire more skills. By trying their hands at different fields, people of young ages are likely to broaden their expertise and even have the chance to put their knowledge gained from previous employment into practice at the new workplace.
On the one hand, this trend brings about various drawbacks. Working in a new company with a different working culture necessitates a quick adaptation. If a fresh employee does not adapt himself quickly to changes, he will be under pressure and usually suffer from mental health problems, namely anxiety and stress. On the other hand, I consider that it is more beneficial for young people to change their jobs and careers. By switching from a job to another, a young employee can benefit from their expanded professional network. For instance, if a Vietnamese blue-collar who moves to an American-based enterprise from its branch in Vietnam, he will have countless opportunities to befriend with a number of international colleagues and thus, enhance his English skills and multicultural solid knowledge.
In conclusion, the young change their jobs and careers for many reasons and I believe that the merits of this trend have more than compensated for the disadvantages.
- Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people say that the most important thing for being rich is people have opportunity for helping other person ? Do you agree or disagree? 56
- The Chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain 11
- People think that countries should produce foods that their population eats and import less food as much as possible To what extent do you agree or disagree 71
- The diagram below shows how a central heating system in a house works.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.you should write at least 150 words. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18791946309 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85176464603 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2037572809 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346278448882 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126531940688 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118737345671 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239629661501 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105816549152 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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