Many.people believe that family has a greater influence on a child's development compared to other factors such as friends, tv, misic and so on. Do you agree or disagree?
Children are the vulnerable section of the society. So, therefore, a group of people consider parents are he most vital in the upbringing of the children. Whereas, other contradicts it by saying that other factors like as TV, music, and friends have great influence on them. So, this essay shall analyse both the view points in the upcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, parents are the founder of the children, as the children are spending most of their time with parents. The basic values such as respect, discipline and politeness can only be taught by responsible parents. Another aspect is that, children learns religion, culture, tradition values by observing their family. I had always followed the footstep of my father such as when there was any occasion in my house, i wore the same cloth as my father and welcomed the guests.
On the other hand, there are many other reason have a great impact in the life of children. The prime one is that, children are watching the news which helps to keep them up-to-date about any type of information. Moreover, spending the tine with friends is also one if the important part in the child's development. Friends teaches them how to be supportive and how keep up trust. At last, music keeps children calm and quite and they feel.
Overall, this essay illustrated that television, friends and music are some of the key reason in the process of child's development but family is the most prominent one in these factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85317460317 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53286224585 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3305816539 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11009922836 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357609304166 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443235586351 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728152063793 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482193691118 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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