Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past why is the case is it a positive development or negative development.
in today's Era people are spending Ayush amount of money on weddings and they are also getting fashionable as compared to past. This trend have both positive and negative effect in upcoming paragraph we will discuss case in effect of the trend.
Firstly, the main reason why marriages are becoming expensive because of development in Lifestyle and increment in income than those of previous generation as in many countries standard of living has increased .Another reason it is to increase society friends and colleagues by organising big parties and weddings.Additionally mentality of people is that made it happens only once in lifetime so to create it is a good memory they spend a lot of money by booking expensive hotels. For example, many couples decide to do destination wedding so they organise their wedding outside of the country to make it a lifetime memory and it also required a lot of money.
On the other hand in pressure of society or group, couples families spend a lifetime savings onweddings in most of the cases family have to borrow money from banks to arrange Grand weddings and later they are unable to repay it due to which it can cause a detrimental effect on married couples. Furthermore, marriages are losing their true value in principle people are focusing more on show off which can further lead to tension and strees on them.
To conclude, the rise in wealth and in pressure of peers influence expensive marriages.However, this type of occasions are degrading the purpose and value of events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96108949416 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87354546628 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.192702417 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.142857143 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.7142857143 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158302963552 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574870293619 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046974954501 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747193907909 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316411504874 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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