Obtensibly, that the mass media improve, to some certain extent, entails the proficiency and efficiency of mankind’s shaping ideas process. This seems to hold appeal to me for some reasons.
First and foremost, through the mass media, for instance, television or radio, people have the opportunity to approach new knowledge and gain information daily. Thereby, the things learnt are gradually accumulated in the brain and then contributed to building the consciously creative-brainstorming skill, which produces ideas only.
For the second reason, ideas are shared. In newspaper, on the Internet, social media, there are always creative mindsets worldwide sharing their own innovative ideas. Not only do adults have terrific ideas but younger generations do as well. Granted, “TEDTalks - Ideas worth spreading” posts their conferences with ideas through speeches made by speakers from many walks of life on Youtube weekly.
Last but not least, once ideas are created , people need experiments to test if they actually work. It was just before the advent of the Internet that humandkind was forced to use “trial and error” method on a new invention. Do you know Thomas Edison- the most prominent inventor ever- succeeded in creating bulb after more than 10.000 failures and trials? However, It doesn’t have to be that way these days. There are stimulators, prefabricated experiments on the Internet, you can manage your idea at the first try.
To put things in a nutshell, the mass media seems to be of great neccessity to the shaping ideas process of the mankind. As a result, this has already been recognised one of the most most significant invention ever created.
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Suggestion: most
... has already been recognised one of the most most significant invention ever created.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, well, as for, for instance, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38721804511 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06767027455 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669172932331 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5904203258 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237895030942 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732571582886 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429045068368 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122214852822 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208698448564 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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