The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people.
These days, the media seems to have preference to news about the daily lives of celebrities. however, some opinions claim that they should report more about the ordinary people lives rather than focus on famous people. I can only partly agree with the assertion.
On the one hand, celebrities is the role models of some people, especially the young ones, and stories about their life such as daily outfits, personal relationships always catch public’s attention and this help the company boosts their rating as well.Therefore, it comes not surprise that the news about stars is on the media every single day. Beside that, the lives of celebrities may be the encouragement for many people. We can see this in the way that when audiences read or watch news about the accomplishment of their idols, this encourage them to strive to be successful like that.
On the other hand, not only the news about celebrities can attract public but the story about some common people can also do the same thing. The noble gesture of ordinary people such as blood donation, charity work at orphanage or hospital,… even little good actions like helping people who have troubles on streets should be reported in the media as much as possible since this kind of news may help audiences feel more positive as well as make them have desire to devote theirselves to society. In addition, news about the energetic poor and the way that they overcome difficulties in their life may encourage many people.
Admittedly, the media should post more the news of the lives of ordinary citizens. however, the celebrities lives is still the hot topic that caters the taste of many people. Hence, in my point of view, the media should proportion the famous people’s news to the news of ordinary people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92715231788 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58892968336 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.9757988137 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257837255487 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113647311182 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852140511835 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185487676057 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672428748946 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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