The media plays a valuable role in keeping us informed and entrained. However, many people believe it has too much power and freedom. Discuss your views on this, giving examples and presenting a balanced argument both in favor of and against, the power and freedom of the media.
Stepping into the 21st century, more contemporary attention has been placed on the ongoing phenomenon that the media plays a vital role in providing people information and relieving stress. On the contrary, others believe that the digital platform has done more harm than good due to its enormous power and freedom. The following essay will take a look at both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, the opinion that the media provides individuals with a tremendous amount of knowledge and helps them entertain is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, information and entertainment on the media are free to access. People do not need to pay for that platforms so that it can help them to save such a sum of money to meet their lives. For example, people can use Facebook Messenger to cheaply chat with their peers or make group plans. Furthermore, the news online is published quickly. Therefore, people can get inside up-to-date news immediately and not get on the heels.
On the other hand, there are various reasons why the media tends to become power and freedom. One reason for this view is that the more popular the media is, the more bad news dominates the headlines. For instance, In Vietnam, it is easy for people to post unreliable and disadvantageous news on well-known social media platforms such as Facebook and Instagram without any checking from the administration. The end result is constant exposure to negative news can distort readers' perception of reality. Another reason is that unlimited access to the media for entertainment will isolate people from society. For that reason, limitless content and entertainment available online keep them engaged for hours, and consequently, it not only affects negatively their physical health but also reduces their circle social and communication skills.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is better to reduce time using the media to get information and entertain. Instead, individuals ought to gain knowledge from reliable books and participate in outdoor activities to improve physical health and increase soft skills.
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also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, look, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18155619597 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81222240807 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576368876081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9455759165 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.764705882 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76470588235 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15138532728 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502459501453 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404228061974 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961614730304 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458276555343 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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