In recent years. humankind has extended much time on cutting-edge internet applications or up-to-date services to find information about what is happening in the world. From the societal perception, a myriad of means of the media show more negative news to readers or viewers, however, people have the proclivity for more good news reported in the media. I personally agree with this point of view.
On the one hand, positive news will bring many subliminal benefits to the general public. There is no denying that youngsters predispose towards emulating the frame of minds as well as manners shown in the newspapers or on television, in addition, frequent exposure to negative news that could undesirably influence on human mental states and distort their view of reality, because of this, good news can help to invigorate their faithful conviction in social issues together with humanity and contribute to restraining them from following pessimistic ideas. Furthermore, stories embodying good news are more likely to both render the populace optimistic and confident and ameliorate moral dignity through perceiving the inherent beauty of communities and values of life. For example, if we were in miserable conditions or underwent physical or mental rehabilitation, those such stories of some industrious and persistent people who endeavoured to overcome a sad experience would motivate us to endure these difficulties sanguinely. Consequently, good news makes people more hopeful and happy about things happening across the world.
On the other hand, I'm firmly convinced that bad news may have a negative psychological implication on society. Personally, this type of news not only propels people to feel apprehensive but also sparks them to experience trauma. For instance, news about the high plundering rates in major cities or the augmentation of terrorism in many areas that can intimidate human minds and make people inclined to believe bad things might always have happened. As a result, it will shape readers'outlook on society in a negative way.
In conclusion, it seems to me that stories of good news can positively affect the moral behaviour of a multitude of people along with improving both their physical and mental states.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35694050992 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96113005708 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606232294618 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.438735074 49.4020404114 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.071428571 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201890568024 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642863123272 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635437550223 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125990820455 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645042661093 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.