Medical professionals such as doctors or nurses from poorer countries often migrate to richer countries to work.
What problems arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with it?
Over the last decade, more and more people, such as nurses and doctors have been leaving their native country to move to wealthier places in order to obtain a better job. This clearly happens due to the fact that individuals seek for warranties in their lives when they are young. To deal with this problem, there are a number of solutions which should be implemented.
Firstly, the reason for people to migrate is because of social and political issues. In other words, the country they want to leave does not offer stability in terms of jobs. For example, a large number of employees work with no permanent contract or, even worse, they are paid without it. Secondly, these professions pay more abroad, therefore, due to better incomes, people leave their native country. As a result, a large number of individuals leave because they do not want to put in their effort into making their country a better place to live.
In order to avoid this problem, there are two effective solutions. One way to tackle this is by ensuring that the political system is not being corrupted. This would mean that everyone would have equal opportunities in obtaining a job. Another method of dealing with migration is by improving what is wrong in the country they want to leave. If people are not happy with their salary, bu giving them a raise, they could be encouraged and do better at work. This could clearly be a reason why people should stay rather than migrate.
To conclude, if those solutions were put into practice, there would not be so many people leaving their country in order to find abroad what they could find without leaving.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...rstly, the reason for people to migrate is because of social and political issues. In othe...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...tability in terms of jobs. For example, a large number of employees work with no permanent contra...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...eave their native country. As a result, a large number of individuals leave because they do not w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7676056338 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36507560608 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7674886218 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196757694442 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719333922531 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560928531652 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130178299826 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514576970265 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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