Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For these reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.Do you agree or disagree?

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Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For these reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?

there is no doubt that having an appropriate career choice plays a pivotal role on our lives. however, people remain divided over whether males and females should be assigned to separate occupation to boost proficiency, due to their distinctive features over personalities and competence. In my opinion, this perception lacks thorough considerations.

First of all, some people still keep their conventional thought of gender stereotypes. Reality proves so: it’s social norm that women are preferable to some specific jobs, namely babysitter. In contrast, tasks including hard manual activities are mostly allocated to men, such as house or road builder. The reason is simple - it’s widely believed there are certainly traits which are typical of each gender, such as the gentle and caring instinct of women and men’s physical conditions. however, there are exceptions to every case. Not every women are considered physically weak and men may perform tasks requiring patience and care as well as their opposite sex. Therefore, it may be a narrow perception to allocate each gender to a certain occupation.

In addition, another reason to reinforce the non-discrimination of genders in career path is that, there is a need for diversity in workplace. due to their variety of perspectives and problem-solving skills, it may enhance chances for creativity and innovation. Furthermore, multidimensional aspects are likely to create objective look at any problems and thus helps to find out the most optimal solution for companies. For this very reason, gender differences are regarded a means to strengthen firm’s performance.

In conclusion, it is my belief that workers of any sex are capable of doing any jobs efficiently. Anyone should not be discouraged from moving up their career ladder because of their gender.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57394366197 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13764658627 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658450704225 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4258580614 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198258140773 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538531195435 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436860113478 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953884855793 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578325133705 0.056905535591 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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