Technology has picturized it's development by leaps and bounds.Moreover, Throughout the globe every individual has his/her gadgets (Mobile Phone, Laptops, MacBook)with them where ever they go. But people of old age find difficulty to adopt these technology. However, There are many ways to help old people so that they could easily manipulate these gadgets in their daily life.
To commence, Old age person is more keen about hearing news, listening to old music or perhaps, to watch cricket. Therefore, Internet can help them to see what they want. Moreover, Using Internet is very simple. For instance, An survey which was conducted in China illustrated that, due to usage of Internet old people who were retired from there job, found that Internet is the best way to utilize their free time.secondly, Mobile Internet encourage every age group people to meet new friends by using social sites(Facebook, Instagram, Skype).
Furthermore, Mobile phone , Laptop, Macbook
Should be design traditionaly(Old material) which will attract old people towards it. Apart from this company can store old music app in Mobile phone which would be inbuilt inside the mobile. For example, A mobile company in India has launched a radio which is named as "Karvan" who has around 2,000 song of old generation. These types of thing facinate old people towards them. Perhaps, Using too much of mobile can cause numerous health issue paticularly is this age.
To sum up, Techonology is benefical is many ways but, It also has a demerit old people are in a age in which they could be effected by usage of mobile phone. Hence, They should be provided with full medical concern.
- Mobile phone and the internet are very useful. However, it is rare for old people to use them. In what ways can mobile phone and the internet be useful to the old people? What could be done to encourage to the old people to use? 73
- Mobile phone and the internet are very useful. However, it is rare for old people to use them. In what ways can mobile phone and the internet be useful to the old people? What could be done to encourage to the old people to use? 73
- In some cultures the old age is more valued while in some cultures youth is more valued Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Mobile phone and the internet are very useful. However, it is rare for old people to use them. In what ways can mobile phone and the internet be useful to the old people? What could be done to encourage to the old people to use? 73
- Some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in order to be successful at school.Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Suggestion: designed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13602941176 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77139574654 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.6289142399 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7857142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.525858589758 0.244688304435 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169068345137 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698830689322 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261824546718 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087925331332 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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