Mobile phones and the internet have made it easier to stay in contact with other people. However, as a lot of time is spent using telephones and computers, there is less face to face contact and direct communication.
Is the growing use of communications technology a positive or a negative development for society.
The advent of modern technological devices such as mobile phones or computers has exerted a great influence on humanity in the last few decades. There is a claim that people are overusing those gadgets to communicate, which declines the traditional communicating way: face to face. From my perspective, I partly agree with this notion.
To commence with, it is an indisputable fact that new technology has been very useful when it comes to communication between human beings. With the emergence of mobile phones or computers, people can easily contact to their friends and familys in different time zones. They are free to talk with others regardless of time barriers or geographical distances. Moreover, thanks to modern technology, more online meetings can be hold, which is much more convenient. And at the help of new technology, we can update our friends and family every information immediately.
Notwithstanding, some believe that that " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 15.488px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">the existence of mobile phones and computers has made face to face communication redundant. it is is " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 15.488px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">apparent that that " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 15.488px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">a large number of people are becoming more and more dependent on technology and develop a passive lifestyle, especially young people. that young people tend to stare at screens all day can lead to escapism. some completely isolate themselves from the outside world. this may eventuate in deterioration in health and serious mental problem. Furthermore, not every problem problem " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 15.488px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">can be conversed online.
In conclusion, while new technology has some detrimental impact on human communication, I opine that the advantages far-outweight the disadvantages. However, people should use modern technology concisely in order to make the most of it and avoid every possible trouble.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0062305296 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.73913802008 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563862928349 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.1716831531 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12708506356 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499627094065 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565414473595 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951178701113 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464718467198 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.