In modern societies, it is possible for people to go shopping, work and communicate via the internet without face-to-face communication. Is it a positive or negative development?
It seems like a common tendency that internet and services that it provides play a vital role in modern people’s lives. Whether this development brings benefits or drawbacks is a furious discussion in recent years. Despite the fact that, I believe it still has a positive impact on our daily lives.
Internet apparently gives people chances to overcome time restriction and geographical barrier. To begin with, shops and other services are now available online in this digital age. It gives us instant access to the information on almost any subject. People can buy goods and services from the comfort of their homes. Furthermore, connections of people becomes more efficient thank to this kind of revolutionized communication. For example, intimates can keep in touch by instant messenger services or emails. Also, it is overwhelming that teleconference is becoming more common for business meetings.
On the other hand, because this communication can explain as a virtual way, criminals increasingly wrap up themselves and use the internet to steal people’s money. Therefore, it is too difficult to distinguish right or wrong about some information from internet. However, governments are expected to improve internet technology and enact relative laws against the internet fraud. The internet environment has already become safe and reliable in many countries. Moreover, people’s awareness about protecting themselves on the internet are the most incredible change in the modern society due to governments’ efforts.
In conclusion, people could adapt many changes in their lives without face-to-face communications because of the internet. Personally, I completely agree this evolution would give people a better experience and be set to continue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ive laws against the internet fraud. The internet environment has already become ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67415730337 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21443024902 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2519558682 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1176470588 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230429643239 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631693678531 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631442035005 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135956457107 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528507600728 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.