Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge.
To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?
In our modern world, many people like to listen to music and read books. That is why there are many individuals who download copyrighted music from the internet without charges. There are many positive and negative opinions about these activities. In this essay I will discuss both sides of this view.
Nowadays, people prefer to download it free from the internet, rather than pay for it, because few reasons. First of all, paid music is quite expensive, so I think that it is better to download it from the internet. Secondly, it is generally known that most of people prefer free things, rather than paid. For example, in my country it is quite difficult to find a licensed music or original book, that is why we have to download it from the internet. Also there are many illegal shops, where everybody can buy a disc or book for a song.
However, it is not good for singers or writers, because it is their salary, and they are earning moneys from this activity. Also everybody knows, that licensed music are very good, and people can listen to it with a great pleasure. Many people claims, that we should buy it rather than download copyrighted music or books. In this case, many researchers indicate that in the nearest future it would be very hard to download it from the internet and people will have to buy it.
In conclusion, I would like to state that if the price of copyrighted books and music will be reduced it would be better for both sides. Because, in this case many people will be able to buy it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'frees'?
Suggestion: frees
... Nowadays, people prefer to download it free from the internet, rather than pay for ...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...t. Secondly, it is generally known that most of people prefer free things, rather than paid. F...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... have to download it from the internet. Also there are many illegal shops, where eve...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... are earning moneys from this activity. Also everybody knows, that licensed music ar...
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Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uced it would be better for both sides. Because, in this case many people will be able ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.188311688312 0.247107183377 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.152597402597 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0941558441558 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0454545454545 0.0501214627716 91% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0811688311688 0.0437548338989 186% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.126623376623 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.025974025974 0.0403226058552 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33765650303 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0357142857143 0.0326793684256 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0681818181818 0.0861772015684 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0324675324675 0.021408717616 152% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0194805194805 0.011925033212 163% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1524.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 273.0 316.048096192 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58241758242 6.12580529183 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.289377289377 0.374742101984 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.194139194139 0.28420135186 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14652014652 0.203846283523 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0695970695971 0.137316102897 51% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33765650303 2.80594681477 83% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.037074148 74% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.56093040696 85% => OK
Word variations: 45.15750694 60.7387585426 74% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3290906023 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 127.492653851 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 37.6139194139 49.1944974215 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.22093023256 1.69124875643 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416853399909 0.332605444948 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147376630143 0.102741220458 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0934892473878 0.0668466124924 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.548396514108 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146449526207 0.148594505496 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173003157645 0.134430193775 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828763074863 0.0742795772207 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.415164221527 0.324371583561 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.126807784142 0.0638462369009 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290310233289 0.228012699653 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514940470949 0.058150111329 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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