In this era of science and technology, majority of kids are pretty keen to spend a lots of time on electronic gadgets such as laptop, computer and cell phone which puts adverse effect on their health . I strongly agree with the given argument and would like to explain my views in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are plethora of reasons that by using electronic devices in unlimited manner by toddlers puts negative impact on their life . The first chief point might be that it makes the sedentary lifestyle of kids .The reason is probably that children like to play videos games on these gadgets which makes puts bad effects on their health .As a result, they may become lazy and inactive and they do not performed any physical activity.The another key point may be that, due to spending more time on the front of computer put detrimental effect on eye sight. Therefore, It can weaker the eye sight of toddlers and may face harmful disease such as myopia etcetera.
The another obvious fact might be that it can put adverse effect on children behavior. It may be reduced the
communication skills among kids. Hence , they may talk very rudily with their elder ones and their parents .It may also create dispute between the family members .Apart from this , parents should fix the time for their children when they can assess these gadgets. It is a responsibilty of parents they check for what purpose their children use these devices .If kids surf on bad sites then parents should describe the demerits of those site to their youngones.
In an epilogue, it can be said that,children should use these electronic in a limited manner under the supervision of their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, apart from, such as, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84668989547 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46145040325 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.201047899 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.1 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109040241335 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400440647337 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378792777583 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583352697395 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278137137971 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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