In this modern world,it is possible to shop,work and communicate with people via internet and live without any face to face contact with others.Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion.Do you support to this development.
In this advance time period ,the life has been made more convenient by technology and it is very feasible for an everyone to fulfill their needs in daily life with the help of internet and people can easily stay lonely from each other without any kind of face to face contact. I fully support to positive development in my opinion.Further ,this essay will examine the varied points of using internet in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the internet has become an integral part in the life of people due to some innovative features in their pivotal works and every work related to study as well as business relies on internet for accumulating a knowledge .Moreover, it can be clearly seen in this modern era how most of the people are willing to purchase several types of products related to cosmetics and household goods as well as it is an immensely used for business purpose for updating a software and useful application to reduce a human presence. As a result, having a good internet access the business strategies are easily expand by owners.
Further more, in the previous period of life ,people had to struggle to communicate without internet but now a days, internet has provided a face to face conversation so people can easily communicate with each other through Skype ,whats app and Facebook and it is the cheapest source for sending an emails to another country. In fact , the major advantage of internet is to create a number of jobs for an every ordinary person.
In conclusion ,according to a number of pros, people are supposed to give a more preference to internet because everything is depend on internet and without internet very difficult to survive in this globalization era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86597938144 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72483108602 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563573883162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.422624894 49.4020404114 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.285714286 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.5714285714 20.7667163134 200% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.4285714286 7.06120827912 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277758708962 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124390164475 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687205020068 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173827777808 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625725402592 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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