In modernization Old buildings which represent culture are now replaced by modern buildings. Discuss and give your opinion with relevant examples.
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon. One of the most controversial issue today relates to, modern buildings. This particular topic asserts that, why modern buildings has replaced the buildings of a past; reflecting culture of society? Through this essay I shall explore the various examples and assertions and shape of my opinion by the end.
In this era of modernization, the culture of societies are vanishing, the major cause is reputation; rising standards of individuals. People for being materialistic, are getting far away from the roots of their culture as well as traditions. Moreover, it is their perception of having quality life then living inside the boundaries of culture. Hence, many buildings get replaced due to stylish and expensive appearance. Many governing authorities or owners of the buildings think that, culture make them old-fashioned behind others; to keep them up to date they had transformed this change.
Secondly, to increase their popularity of having good infrastructure; they tend to forget about all the customs, and traditions of their ancestors. This change is mainly occur due to technological advancement in less time consuming machineries. In past, buildings were not well maintained, but nowadays, everything is done after planning it properly. New buildings have advanced equipments or gadgets which take time in seconds, to complete any work with full efficiency, which past one's does not have. Today, business is mostly depend on productivity which allow them having a name and fame in the society.
So putting my pen down, I shall say that an effective clap requires use of both hands, so culture as well as development both are equally important, but both should work in such a way, that each will not harm other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23606557377 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01999784648 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64262295082 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5424239195 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183953265812 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052967398274 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566884206677 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981796531407 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657994770781 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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