World is wasting money on space and don’t using in right way .
Space exploration is activity which need huge reserves. Some individuals think that money should be spent on other programs which basic peoples needs and living standard. To my mind, i completely agree with this notion.
To begin with, space exploration helps us to find new lands, new sources of energy and potential threats to the globe. The advances in these areas are very essential for future needs. For instance, it is a known fact that we are running out of petroleum or nuclear products. And we need slowly to start founding some new resources or plans how to change what we are using for something new witch we have a lot or we gona have.
Dwellers in the world are facing significant number of issues. Many countries citizens are suffering to get food and water plus manny children are not getting a single meal per day and doesn't have clothes to cover their body. And do not eaven have access to education system due to lack of facilities. Every day, new form of virus or diseases are effectingto theyr health and life. A governments should try to found and spend some money on findings cures for these harmful bacteria’s. For example, researchers are not able to find medicines for lung cancer , HIV, and AIDS from a long time. And secondary for food wather some small houses and edukations for kids.
Nations should think about investing in space researching space or investing in countrees or peaoples witch need realy the money. Becouse the space si out there all the time but dayily in some countrees are dienig kids and pepople becous they are sick or don’t have clean wather and food . And secondary to roof uper head and schools.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ncern of the world is wasting of money. Space exploration is activity which need...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew witch we have a lot or we gona have. Dwellers in the world are facing signifi...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e not getting a single meal per day and doesnt have clothes to cover their body. And d...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 383, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A government' or simply 'governments'?
Suggestion: A government; Governments
... are effectingto theyr health and life. A governments should try to found and spend some mone...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 557, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t able to find medicines for lung cancer , HIV, and AIDS from a long time. And sec...
^^
Line 9, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...sick or don’t have clean wather and food . And secondary to roof uper head and sch...
^^
Line 9, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...econdary to roof uper head and schools.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77408637874 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43211708179 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624584717608 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9312006337 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145756800769 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427027147376 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500904436699 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922997933886 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695495788958 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ncern of the world is wasting of money. Space exploration is activity which need...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew witch we have a lot or we gona have. Dwellers in the world are facing signifi...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e not getting a single meal per day and doesnt have clothes to cover their body. And d...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 383, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A government' or simply 'governments'?
Suggestion: A government; Governments
... are effectingto theyr health and life. A governments should try to found and spend some mone...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 557, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t able to find medicines for lung cancer , HIV, and AIDS from a long time. And sec...
^^
Line 9, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...sick or don’t have clean wather and food . And secondary to roof uper head and sch...
^^
Line 9, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...econdary to roof uper head and schools.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77408637874 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43211708179 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624584717608 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9312006337 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145756800769 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427027147376 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500904436699 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922997933886 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695495788958 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.