More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city.
How can governments make urban life better for everyone ?
Some people were naturally born in cities, but some were not and were born in countrysides. People in outside of the town see the developments that happen in the city and also believe that they can experience a turning point by migrating to town side. However, it is not as easy as it seems, people might have difficulties, therefore, governments have to participate on making urban life better for everyone.
Growing up in the countryside, your surrounding must be very peaceful and calm with zero traffic jams, the people are less busier too as the occupation at there are not that varied. Diversely, city people are very busy and do not budge with unnecessery things, goods are also more expensive in city as well as living cost. Having difficulties on adapting on the lifestyle can be a common case from them, they might not be accepted in the society and can be rejected while applying for a job in some companies.
I think it is really necessary and important for governments to also pay attention to this issue. They can provide people from countryside several training or workshop so they can have higher opportunity on get accepted and to have needed skills. Besides that, a law or requirement also need to make in order to not have excessive people migrating to cities, so, urbanitation can also go well.
In conclusion, adapting can take longer than people think, however, if the governments happen to do something, try to follow it so urban life can be better for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...yone. Growing up in the countryside, your surrounding must be very peaceful and c...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less busy'?
Suggestion: less busy
... with zero traffic jams, the people are less busier too as the occupation at there are not ...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun training seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some training'.
Suggestion: some training
...hey can provide people from countryside several training or workshop so they can have higher opp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81712062257 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76544495679 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552529182879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.1199269587 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358702653899 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128075521446 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763788862729 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216413888369 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606363190668 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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