More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life
can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How
can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Nowadays, there are an increasing number of rural migrants into metropolises looking for better living conditions, but urban life might be challenging due to a few issues. However, I believe that governments can carry out some improvements on citizens’ life.
The main problem of living in a city is that the cost of living is higher than that in rural areas. City dwellers pay higher for education, housing, and food. Another issue is that life in a cities are becoming more stressful for its inhabitants. An overwhelming workload and traffic problems have placed a severe strain on citizens. Futhermore, inhabitants of a metropolis are more likely to suffer from health problems than those living in a town. In a city, there are more factories and workshops than in a village, which means that more hazardous waste leading to lung diseases is disposed every year. As a result, living in a city might be less advisable.
However, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly,they could relocate factories to suburbs to cut industrial pollution in urban areas. Secondly, politicians should implement a plan to urbanize provincial towns and rural areas, which would help to reduce city population. Thus, there will be less vehicles and traffic congestion, which means that city dwellers' life would be more relaxing. The third option would be to spend money on campaigns to educate people about the importance of protecting the environment, in order to improve citizens’ health.
In conclusion, governments could probably adopt a range of measures to improve city life.
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 73
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a city' or simply 'cities'?
Suggestion: a city; cities
...and food. Another issue is that life in a cities are becoming more stressful for its inh...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...d take to tackle these problems. Firstly,they could relocate factories to suburbs to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e factories to suburbs to cut industrial pollution in urban areas. Secondly, poli...
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Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vehicles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ce city population. Thus, there will be less vehicles and traffic congestion, which ...
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Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dwellers'' or 'dweller's'?
Suggestion: dwellers'; dweller's
...affic congestion, which means that city dwellers life would be more relaxing. The third ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in order to improve citizens’ health. In conclusion, governments could probabl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28076923077 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87052971216 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5597067889 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388841430919 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120047578733 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813027089494 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22567115222 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038243762051 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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