It is true that many rural citizens are moving to the metropolis to improve their lives and job prospects, but there are several drawbacks for a city life. In my opinion, government could do much more to improve the life of city inhabitants.
The main problem for anyone who wants to live in the city is the cost of living. Compare to rural areas, urban areas have higher cost of living for transport , housing and even food. Another issue is that job search can be competitive compares to bucolic areas since metropolis tend to attract many talent workers. Furtherore, the air quality in the city is often poor, due to pollution from traffic, and the streets and city transport systems are usually crowded. As a result, city life can be unhealthy and stressful.
However, there are various steps that governments could take to mitigate these problems. Firstly, they could invest money in building of affordable and social housing to reduce the cost of living. Secondly, politicians and authorities have the power to ban vehicles that could exhaust gas excessively and promote the use of cleaner public transport, which would help reduce both air pollution and traffic congestion. In Vietnam, for instance, the introduction of a congestion charge could helped curb the traffic problems. Finally, they could help develop provincial towns and rural areas, by moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major cities.
In conclusion, governments could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all city residents.
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- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishm 61
- Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21 To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree with this view 73
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: help
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08461538462 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64697445673 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7320276308 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.692307692 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275410768125 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109436168017 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105229497146 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192566514369 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10891810542 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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