Although there are a number of people avocates for information to be shared with the purpose of researching and learning, I would argue that there are some information which are too sensitive to be shared for the public to learn and research about.
On the one hand, with information shared widely for the public, it can be easier to informs and teaches citizen about new discovery when it has been made. This could help people to act accordingly and calmly towards the situation. As a result, there will be less hysteria and panic through out the world. For instance, Covid-19 had cause many people to panic since there were little information to know about the virus at the time.
On the other hand, I believe that there are some information that are too valueable to be given out to the public to know. Many of these information are mainly kept in secret by the Government. They have allocated majority of their nation budgets for projects that can improve the lives of their citizens or to prepare for upcoming war, and have performed many projects in secret, in order to not leaked the information of the plan to the enemy. To illustrate, USA in World War 2 had developed a nuclear weapon in secret which had helped them win the war, and bring peace back to the world.
In conclusion, there are information that can be shared publicly so that people around the globe can be assured but some information might be too sensitive and vital to be shared which could be a breach of national security.
- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages 73
- In recent years more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 56
- The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area in Britain The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed 67
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes Other people believe that it is important 61
- Some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school age children Others think that children 039 s time is better spent on more academic subjects Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
..., there will be less hysteria and panic through out the world. For instance, Covid-19 had c...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...iven out to the public to know. Many of these information are mainly kept in secret by the Govern...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...publicly so that people around the globe can be assured but some information migh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67293233083 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50124340157 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518796992481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9190555821 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.3 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318293821558 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130151569753 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113130525908 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220902875283 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713022566512 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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