More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
it is true that city accommodations are getting harder nowadays. there are many reasons for this issue but I believe this situation should be addressed in some effective ways.
there are several reasons why it need a lot of efforts to survive in the city. The first thing I want to mention is that financial issues is absolutely the biggest deal in urban areas. For instance, it not only the price for accommodations but also the cost of living like food, necessary goods and medical are more expensive due to the fact that the demands are totally larger. Apart from what I mentioned above, citizens in the urban place are having more struggle to collect incomes day by day. For example, the employment competition in the municipality are more challenging than in the rural areas owning the fact that labor forces in the modern city have greater changes to learn and develop in many high qualified universities.
there are also many actions that the government could take to solve the problems mentions above. The first solution is that the government should elevate the living qualities in the municipality since that improvements could help citizens easier to handle their life. The next solution I want to dedicate is that the authorities should invest more to the rural areas, not only for industrial and financial but also for service and education. With those investing plans, the rural place could be developed faster and have more attractive to the young and skilled labor forces from urban areas.
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- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 56
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 56
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 56
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 56
- More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mmodations are getting harder nowadays. there are many reasons for this issue but I b...
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...be addressed in some effective ways. there are several reasons why it need a lot o...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'incomes'' or 'income's'?
Suggestion: incomes'; income's
...ace are having more struggle to collect incomes day by day. For example, the employment...
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...in many high qualified universities. there are also many actions that the governme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, apart from, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95275590551 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58434505391 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543307086614 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5228857397 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.363636364 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188865151357 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634037727367 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330656757388 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121993562764 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104454033967 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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