more and more people are moving from the countryside to live cites. What problem can this cause? How can these problems be solve?
Nowadays many people are leaving the rural areas to come to live in the city. Leading to many problems serious such as environment, population, employees… it is necessary to have a plan to solve this problem.
First of all, The number of rural people migrating to the city is increasing due to the higher income level of the city and the development of infrastructure. However, life is not as imagined, there are many problems such as environment, population, traffic... when the employee is high, job opportunities are getting lower and lower and unemployment is easy leading to pressure and stress. . The large population of the city leads to traffic jams and environmental pollution that affects the quality of life.
On the other hand, Government needs to intervene to come up with solutions to solve this situation. For example, developing the agricultural sector creates job opportunities and encourages people to stay in the countryside. industrialize the city's suburbs to reduce traffic jams and environmental pollution. The government should have policies to support housing and reduce the cost of living for workers in the city.
In conclusion, The city is undeniably a place for job growth and its convenience. however the city becomes crowded which leads to problems such as environmental pollution, traffic jams and unemployment. therefore the government needs to come up with policies to reduce this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...is easy leading to pressure and stress. . The large population of the city leads ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Industrialize
...ages people to stay in the countryside. industrialize the citys suburbs to reduce traffic jam...
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Suggestion: However
...ace for job growth and its convenience. however the city becomes crowded which leads to...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...ace for job growth and its convenience. however the city becomes crowded which leads to...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...llution, traffic jams and unemployment. therefore the government needs to come up with po...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...llution, traffic jams and unemployment. therefore the government needs to come up with po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30396475771 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16660591865 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515418502203 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4078831611 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.6153846154 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113490650131 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434694108694 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473105278838 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085187391365 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574698517393 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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